Introductions When you write an introductory paragraph, you are generally establishing the CONTEXT of the essay and the primary ARGUMENT/PURPOSE of your essay. You do these things by:
The introduction establishes the contract between you and your reader--a clearly composed and well-edited introduction establishes your ethos. As a reader, I am much more willing to forgive "errors" and inconsistencies later in the essay than I am early in the essay. Think about it. Imagine you pick up a magazine in a waiting room and start reading an article. If you are confused in the first paragraph, you'll stop reading, flip the page, put the magazine down. If you're bored in the first paragraph, you'll stop reading. If the first paragraph is riddled with errors and weirdness, you'll stop reading. Your teachers do not have the choice to stop reading, but they do have to grade you, so a strong introduction is key to a successful essay. Keep in mind, what content goes in the intro paragraph largely depends on the prompt and the genre. Personal or expository essays might begin with a story or illustration whereas a problem-solution essay usually begins with an overview of the problem to set up the solution. Writing the introduction is hard work. Some writers find it easier to write the introduction AFTER they write the rest of the essay—then they know what context they are introducing. I often write a place-filler intro to get myself started, and then come back and revise the crap out of it later. Also, there are many patterns for writing an introduction. Do an internet search for “essay introduction strategies” and you’ll come up with dozens, like these. However, please, for the love of my sanity, do not quote a dictionary definition in your intro (or anywhere else in your essay for that matter). Example Introductory Paragraphs Research Essay: What
Should We Be Teaching in Schools Teaching
Students
Their Rights
Freedom of religion. Right to due
process. Right to privacy. These are just a few rights guaranteed by
the U.S.
Constitution. They are also among the constitutional rights applying to
students. Students have been placed into a separate category of people
when it
comes to legal matters in the United States. As a result, their rights
slightly
differ from that of adults. They still have the rights listed in the
Constitution,
but the interpretation may vary because of policies created by public
schools.
Public schools have rules restricting certain rights to an extent in
order to
ensure the safety of all students on campus. The rules created have
stirred
troublesome situations with students in the past, many of which have
been taken
to court. Therefore, along with the Constitution, various court cases
have set
a precedent of rights for students specifically. Unfortunately, many
students
are unaware of these rights and how they can play into their daily
lives. It is
the job of the schools to teach students of their rights, regardless of
personal opinions. When they are in middle or high school, it
should be
required of schools to teach their students about all of the rights
they are
promised, constitutionally and otherwise. —Syeda Learning
Language;
Learning Culture There
was a hot discussion in my English
class. The question was “what is intelligence?” The class had diverse
ideas and
were sitting in a circle engaged talking to each other. I was amazed by
their
original ideas. I agreed with many of their thoughts, but I had my own
opinions
and I wanted to participate in the discussion. In spite of my
thoughtful ideas,
I missed my chance to talk. Here is what was happening in my brain. I
was
listening to my peers, translating their English to Korean. I was
thinking my
thoughts in Korean, organizing my sentences in Korean, and then
translating
those to English. I have been in America for three years, studying and
speaking
in English. I study hard and have earned high scores on intelligence
tests
and my
school work. Yet my speaking English still falters. Learning English
has been a
struggle, and not just a struggle of learning words, but a struggle of
learning
to join the conversation, and learning to join the culture. —Jinkyung Personal Essay: Significance of Place Land
of Opportunities I
often complain about living in Woodland,
and how it is small, there is nowhere to do anything, and not even an
actual
mall because that “thing” in the middle of town is definitely nowhere
near the
definition of a mall. I complain about school, probably the most, about
waking
up early and the homework; even though I know I should do it on time,
but I
will never stop being a procrastinator. These things I complain about
are
really a luxury, a luxury that not everyone gets to have. Opportunities
are
tied to place, and where you end up
by
chance on this planet almost always determines them. In Think,
Lisa Bloom states that women in American have “the great
good fortune to be born…in a country that expects females to become
educated
and to contribute.” I had the good fortune of being born in the United
States,
and as a female Pakistani-American, until recently I really never
thought to
think I should be grateful for something as simple as where I was born.
But I’ve
changed my mind. —Misbah
Definition Essay: Marriage Love:
the Foundation
of Marriage I
am twenty-seven, married, and born into a
Mexican-American family. Although I was born in America, I grew up in a
culture
where family means everything and traditions are taken
seriously. I am a family girl at heart, and
as such, marriage and children mean a great deal to me. I have known my
husband
for almost seven years, and we have been married two. Most people call
this the
“Honeymoon” phase, but believe me, this marriage has its ups and downs.
Luckily
for us, we experienced a lot of our hardships during our dating days,
so we
have figured out how to address our issues in a calm manner. In an
excerpt from
Marriage, A
History, by Stephanie Coontz, she writes, “Whether it is
valued
or not, love is rarely seen as the main ingredient for marital
success.”
However, as I understand it, love is one of the main building blocks in
a
marriage, and love should include respect, trust, and communication to
maintain
a stable and lasting marriage. —Angelica Expository Essay: Mirror to the Mind Vulnerability
This assignment has literally been one
of the hardest assignments of my life. It awakened something inside I
didn’t
see coming. At first I thought the purpose of this assignment was
directed at
making a career choice, discovering our personality types, or
determining what
might make us happy. Yet after watching the short videos in class, and
reading
the online articles, and taking personality tests, I soon realized that
there
was more to this, and assignment whose goal was likely to get us to dig
deeper
into ourselves and our personalities, and to reflect on where we are
today,
where we want to be, and how we might get there. Brene Brown’s TEDx
speech,
“The Power of Vulnerability" opened my eyes to fear and how it affects
people;
in fact I cried that day after watching that and went home and watched
it a few
more times. It gave me a sense of where I am today, where I want to be,
and
where I need some change. The process of gaining self knowledge like
this may
not be easy or comfortable, but it is essential to living a whole,
positive
life, and embracing a meaningful future. Note: As a rule, I do not recommend directly mentioning the assignment in the essay; yet, because of the nature of the topic and process for this writer, it works for this example. Argument Essay: Literary Analysis How
Do I Love Me?
All relationships, whether they are
rooted in love or merely friendship, need a good foundation upon which
to
build, and just as a home built on a weak foundation will wash away in
the
driving rains, the relationships that are built on weak underpinnings
will also
wash away during the trials of life. A strong individual cornerstone
needed by
those building a solid relational foundation is a healthy self-esteem,
but
unfortunately for some people a high regard for one’s self is often
taken to an
unhealthy extreme because they suffer from a personality disorder which
makes it
nearly impossible for them to establish and maintain close
relationships. Rob
Fleming, of Nick Hornby’s High
Fidelity, also has problems developing close bonds and while
his strained
relationships also include family and friends, it’s the failed
relationships of
the female persuasion that are his primary focus as he spends an
inordinate
amount of his time dissecting and attempting to self-diagnose the
reasons why
those relationships failed. Unfortunately what Rob
is unable to
diagnose is that he suffers from a mental health disease called
Narcissistic
Personality Disorder (NPD) which is the primary cause of his
unsuccessful
attempts at building strong interpersonal relationships. —Gayle
Big
Boys Do Cry
In today’s society children are taught from birth that boys and girls
have
different expectations and roles they are required to play. Girls are
the ones
who are nurturing caregivers who take care of the home and children,
while her
husband is the strong supportive one who provides monetarily for his
family.
This has led to the sexist belief that girls are the ones who cry and
are
highly emotional, and boys are the strong and stable ones who show no
emotion.
If a boy does dare to show his emotion he is often ridiculed and called
names
or made to feel that he is inferior to other men which can lead many
men to
repress and deny their feelings. Rob Fleming, the main
protagonist, is a perfect example of what happens when emotion
is bottled
up without release. As with most things in life, emotion will always
find a way
to come out one way or another. In Nick Hornby’s High
Fidelity, patriarchy has established societal
expectations that have forced Rob to repress his emotions causing him
to
project his feelings of insecurity, inadequacy, and anger onto those
around
him, diminishing his own feelings of self-worth and the quality of his
personal
relationships. —Shannon
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